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¤ milky moon ¤ • View topic - Sapokanikan ['Look and Despair']
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Re: New Song at Treasure Island (Look and Despair)

PostPosted: 21 Nov 2012, 21:59
by butterbean
Wow, you guys are amazing.

I agree with claire about "While elsewhere Tobias and the angel diguise.." instead of "Well, I swear.." - even though that phrase is one that would be at home in a Joanna song.

Also, I hear "lorn and leveled" instead of "lone and leveled"?

Alex, the "I" in that narration... it struck me as a sort of universal plea of the dying person - to be held and remembered by the people they love - I imagined it as the refrain of the 20,000 underfoot, with no monuments erected in their honor. Like, listening in on their collective memories of their dying moments.... especially "I call, I call for the doctor" makes me think of someone perishing of a feverish illness - and most of the local victims of the yellow fever epidemics were buried there. But then - that passage is so woven in to John Purroy Mitchell's story, that maybe it's all just his voice... he falls (from the plane), he tried to do well, but thinks he won't be remembered (he never got to the Western Front, where his work might count), all that matters now is his love for his wife (although it could be some other hidden love, as you said), and hers for him - her remembrance, he calls out desperately for the doctor, but death takes him before any help can arrive. His life becomes obscured by the hand of the Master as it moves on (like Florry Walker, the woman under Patch of Grass, the mother and kid). I love what you said about the personal and heartfelt stories underneath the bombastic tributes... and even the personal and heartfelt stories live only in print... and the print can't ever really contain the full measure of a person, their essential nature - what is essential is really unrecordable.

Sorry if I'm repeating things, just trying to put it together in my own mind.

Re: New Song at Treasure Island (Look and Despair)

PostPosted: 22 Nov 2012, 15:14
by Ququuluru
:redx:

Re: New Song at Treasure Island (Look and Despair)

PostPosted: 22 Nov 2012, 15:55
by Alex Ysoltsev

Re: New Song at Treasure Island (Look and Despair)

PostPosted: 22 Nov 2012, 19:22
by andrewb
Sapokanikan! Wow! And I like "lorn" too.

Re: New Song at Treasure Island (Look and Despair)

PostPosted: 22 Nov 2012, 20:31
by butterbean

Re: New Song at Treasure Island (Look and Despair)

PostPosted: 22 Nov 2012, 21:36
by andrewb
Reminds me of He-Who-Easily-Can-Curve-Himself-Against-The-Sky :)

Re: New Song at Treasure Island (Look and Despair)

PostPosted: 22 Nov 2012, 21:50
by Alex Ysoltsev
And here is another very interesting article about X-rays revealing a hidden painting.
Although this work of Rembrandt is not explicitly mentioned or in any other way referred in the lyrics, it is still a very interesting read which adds quite a lot to the theme.
And it also has this quote:
“At the time, Rembrandt’s many students perfected their technique by copying their teacher’s works,” said Dik. “As a result, there’s a whole complex group of paintings that are exactly the same, slightly modified, or in some way related to each other,” he said. “The goal is to understand more about how they are related and where the hand of the master begins and ends.”

I also like the following words of the scientist:
“You can’t always judge a painting by its surface!”

Article:
http://www.bnl.gov/ps/eNews/news.asp?a=2740&t=today

A short variant of the article:
http://news.discovery.com/history/rembr ... 11205.html

Re: New Song at Treasure Island (Look and Despair)

PostPosted: 23 Nov 2012, 00:43
by claire

Re: New Song at Treasure Island (Look and Despair)

PostPosted: 23 Nov 2012, 02:09
by Jordan~
Plastic pan also works in a public park. Never seen a busker playing a plastic pan drum?

Re: New Song at Treasure Island (Look and Despair)

PostPosted: 04 Dec 2012, 01:00
by Southy
Had to chime in and comment, since I've had the luxury to come to this after much of the heavy lifting has been done. :notworthy:

To me, this song is written about the 20,000 people buried under Washington Square Park and what had been the native American settlement that existed. The Ozymandian cause mentioned in the first few lines is that of the people who lie beneath the park, whose settlement and existence has been quite well "painted over" first by a military parade ground and then by a public park, except in this instance there is no way to uncover what these people lived and died for.

The swift turn to John Purroy Mitchell, to me, is one of contrast and irony - which also helps explain the sharp melodic turn. Basically, that the records and tributes that have been erected in the public parks speak of specific individuals that came after, so that anyone who, a hundred years from now, will know only these stories and people, and even as they walk above thousands of buried human remains, will be completely ignorant of what lies below.

When I re-read the lyrics with this perspective, the lines about the ages' rag and the "Will you remember?" and even King Tamanend bit seem to fall right into place for me.

Curious if someone sees it the same way.

Re: New Song at Treasure Island (Look and Despair)

PostPosted: 04 Dec 2012, 05:54
by Wanbli

Re: New Song at Treasure Island (Look and Despair)

PostPosted: 04 Dec 2012, 12:03
by under a CPell
Hi Southy! I think your interpretation makes a lot of sense!
I can't help but wonder whether Joanna would feel delighted or a bit bummed when she would know that her lyrics to this amazing song have already been deciphered and analysed before they are even published...

Re: New Song at Treasure Island (Look and Despair)

PostPosted: 11 Dec 2012, 07:42
by butterbean

Re: New Song at Treasure Island (Look and Despair)

PostPosted: 11 Dec 2012, 07:53
by butterbean
I went back and saw that people had already written about King Tamanend's name & also a statue of him being "employed" by Tammany Hall; also the irony of someone of such seemingly sound moral character being used as a mascot by those with much to be desired in the ethics department - apologies, can't keep it straight!

Re: New Song at Treasure Island (Look and Despair)

PostPosted: 11 Dec 2012, 11:55
by Jordan~

Re: New Song at Treasure Island (Look and Despair)

PostPosted: 11 Dec 2012, 12:49
by Alex Ysoltsev

Re: New Song at Treasure Island (Look and Despair)

PostPosted: 12 Dec 2012, 01:39
by butterbean
Now that is a perfect anagram! :luv:

Re: New Song at Treasure Island (Look and Despair)

PostPosted: 23 Dec 2012, 03:52
by teenagelightning
I don't think the word is "lorn" because the poem of Ozymandias (to which Joanna refers as a theme of the song) uses the phrase "Of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare, The lone and level sands stretch far away." I know "lorn" and "lone" are similar in meaning, however if we're interested in accuracy I believe the better word is "lone."

Re: New Song at Treasure Island (Look and Despair)

PostPosted: 02 Jan 2013, 20:40
by butterbean
good call, teenagelightning!

Re: New Song at Treasure Island (Look and Despair)

PostPosted: 02 Jan 2013, 20:55
by butterbean
These temporary pyramids in Queens made me think of this song... lordy.